Airplanes and Thesis

Hello
Im just writing today to ask for help. I would like to visit home sometime shortly after I turn in my thesis so I can visit family and friends before I start the real world and get a job (yea I'm laughing too as if thats actually going to happen). So if any of you see any good deals to KC or STL from Toronto let me know. Thanks!
Also I have finished my first draft of my thesis and have sent it into my supervisor for comments, but as I read over it today I realized just how horrid I am with grammer/punctuation so I was wondering if anyone out there is good at it and has time on there had if they would like proofread it for me. No? well I thought I would try
Later